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Promotion Below-The-Zone 4Y031/ Dental Assistant Apprentice Example SrA Below the Zone (BTZ) Winning Nomination for 2Q 2008
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LEADERSHIP AND PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES
- Exceptional Airman who performed far above standards--Airman of Quarter MDOSx3, MDGx3, ABW, ESC
- Accomplishments culminated in MDOS Airman of the Year 2006--team player who sets the "gold" standard
- Key player in the 2006 HSI/AAAHC MDG "Excellent" rating and rare Dental "Outstanding" inspection results
- Passionate duty performance crucial in flight's selection as first ever AFMC Small Dental Clinic of the Year
- Actions as moulage team trusted agent directly contributed to MDG "Excellent" ORI rating--garnered IG coin
- Masterfully assisted in delivering dental care worth $510K--98.7% ?AFB personnel dentally ready to deploy
- Precisely handled dental biopsy program--100% accountability--timely notification relieved patients' anxiety
- First responder for patient syncope episode--commended on expert actions/skills/sense of urgency--life saved
- Revised dental scrub procedures--managed proper handling/storage/stock levels--infection control guaranteed

TRAINING, EDUCATION AND SELF-IMPROVEMENT EFFORTS
- Completed 30 hrs moulage training--exceptional EET member in training--assured realistic exercise scenarios
- Certified instructor--Basic Life Support--taught enlisted/officers basic life saving skill--first-rate performer
- Completed prophylaxis training certification--bolstered deployment readiness rates to command high 98.7%

OTHER ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- Active member of <BASE> Against Drunk Driving--dispatcher/driver--concerned for safety of base personnel
- Concerned citizen--Toys for Tots, Habitat for Humanity, Airman family readiness center--brilliant role model
- Precisely executed POW/MIA table ceremony at ABW Dining Out--galvanized integrity of time honored event

Note:
Very good BTZ package.  The opening lines speaks volumes and makes this a hard one not to appreciate.  Since I have no medical background, I am not very knowledgeable on all of the bullets, but I have enough of a background to know that in the Medical world getting into extra curricular activities is very difficult and you will seldom see honor guard participation in the MDG world.