Promotion
Below-The-Zone
5R051/Chaplain Assistant
Example SrA Below the Zone (BTZ) Nomination for 2007 |
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Cream of the crop--recognized as top performer & named PACAF "Chaplain
Assistant of the Year" for 2006
- Showcased Airman--highlighted HC/personal achievements--coined by Chairman of
the Joint Chiefs of Staff!
- Reliable & accurate--assumed responsibilities of three Amn in 66% undermanned
staff--exceeded expectations
- Flawlessly procured $22k of Appropriated Funds purchases without issue--vital
to successful HC operations
- Driven to excel--Wing Staff Amn of Qtr & Associate Group Amn of
Qtr--immeasurable Chapel/wing impact
- Innovative--created new way to fund off-base trips while deployed; saved Air
Force $1k monthly--true asset!
- Expertly created new background check process for Chapel volunteers--maximized
efficiency & accountability
- Ensured efficient sq ft usage for 100's during difficult facility
transition--25 base programs managed perfectly
- Indispensable--routine commitment to excellence integral to 2007 PACAF Small
Chapel of the Year Award
TRAINING, EDUCATION AND SELF-IMPROVEMENT EFFORTS
- Motivated to advance--aggressively completed five-level CDC's in 1/2 the
allotted time with 87% final score
- Resolute--doubled fitness hrs, began weights program--improved fitness
score/health/well-being & lost 21lbs
- Goal oriented--completed 6 credit hours towards CCAF; earned 97% in Western
Civilization--diligent student
OTHER ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- Selfless--donated 264 hrs as mgr of North Star Cafe & outreach society
participant--over 1500 lives impacted
- Coordinated purchasing & building of five showers at Tok Mok orphanage--200+
children now able to bathe
- Tenaciously helped garner $19k for outreach society through expert oversight &
tireless advocacy--Amazing!
Note:
Very good package. Looking between the lines on this package, the person
who won this most likely competed at the wing level with all other squadrons who
had less than 6 A1Cs competing for BTZ on that quarter. Thus the pool of
packages this competed against says a lot!
The almost all of the lines show
how the Airman achieved leadership potential while meeting the whole person
concept. The author did a very good job having punch in each bullet. This
is a very good package and is clearly understandable why the A1C won BTZ.
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