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Promotion Below-The-Zone 2A632/ Aerospace Ground Equipment (AGE) Apprentice Example SrA Below the Zone (BTZ) Nomination for 2006
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Initiated installation of 37 holdbin parts; installed all parts in 4 days; reduced awaiting maintenance status 13%
- Identified improper stencil on 28 FL-1D light carts; took action to ensure TO compliance and operator safety
- Discovered a -60A generator fuel leak; quick response averted 90 gallon spill/prevented environmental mishap
- Repaired MJ-2A hydraulic test stand compensator valve; replaced seals in lieu of entire assembly; saved 1.5K

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Aggressively pursuing CCAF degree; taking Speech class to attain goal and increase verbal/written proficiency
- Completed MJ-1B bomb lift Field Training Detachment course; efforts increased fleet readiness and reliability
- Dedicated to meeting AF physical fitness requirements; achieved an outstanding 93% on annual fitness test

BASE/COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Volunteers as <NAME> High School assistant wrestling coach; provides positive influence for <BASE> youth
- Participated in formation of Group and Wing change of command ceremonies; contributed to esprit-de-corps
- Dedicates off duty time making Top IV pen sets for ALS graduates; provided 34 pen sets for five ALS classes
 

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  This package won at a large squadron.  Overall, not a bad package, yet it seems to be missing something...