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Promotion Below-The-Zone 4N051/Aerospace Medical Journeyman Example SrA Below the Zone (BTZ) Nomination for 2006
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Showcased Maternal-Newborn Unit to FW/CC & MDG/CC; highlighted accomplishments--coined by FW/CC
- Avid educator; professionally instructed 46 families on newborn care/CPR--early discharges saved MDG $5K
- Recognized newborn in respiratory distress; initiated life-saving measures--saved MDG $10K in transfer costs
- Aided in 32 normal deliveries/nine c-sections; precise APGAR's provided optimum care--all lives preserved
- Restructured L&D supply/labor rooms; unit supply shortfalls slashed by 50%--recaptured $1K toward budget
- Assisted with '06 Influenza program; 2.7K inoculations administered--<BASE> 75% compliant within 1st week
- EOC monitor; performed inspections/conducted safety briefings--contributed to JACHO/HSI "Excellent" rating
- ## MDOS/## MDG Airman 4th Qtr/## MDOS Airman of the Yr--contributions led to MTF Performance Awd

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Enrolled in American Military University; completed 12 hours/maintained 3.5 GPA--three classes from CCAF
- Educated on vacuum delivery; facilitated class for 19--enhanced knowledge/procedures on birthing difficulties
- Attended blood transfusion inservice; equipped for life-threatening emergencies--expanded capabilities by 5%

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Committee member; organized two "Nurse/Tech Week" fundraiser's--earned $1.5K/improved morale for 130
- Donated 6 hrs of emergent care for <BASE>Half Marathon; patrolled route--successful event for 305 runners
- Selflessly set-up/manned "Breast Cancer Awareness" booth; educated base population on risks--100 contacted
- Devoted 12 hrs to teach Sunday school; enabled youth in understanding bible studies--mentor for eight preteens
- Active in base theater guild; landed roles in "A Christmas Carol" & "Romeo and Juliet"--brought joy to 215


LIST OF ACRONYMS:
L&D= Labor and Delivery
EMT= Emergency Medical Technician
 

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This is an OUTSTANDING BTZ package.  Good example of quantified percentages, high impact and leadership expected of an NCO.