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 Civilian Achievement Award package

They do civilian medals totally different than
military medals.  A wanted a narrative and citation are submitted together on
letterhead

This was an approved medal









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The following Civilian Achievement award has been taken from Word, so the formatting might be off.  I did not change mission information, only names to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  If you have anything you would like to submit, please do so.  If you have found this information useful, please let me know. Everyone of these letters has taken considerable amount of time to put together.  Please treat yourself to something special from one of the ads on the page.  We will both get something out of it.  (All money gathered pays for hosting fees and domain fees.  HONESTLY, when I see money come in it also prompts me to work harder on the site.)


Aggressively accepted the challenge as the directorate budget point of contact.  Ms. XXX took the initiative and developed the fiscal year budget to distribute $781,000 within the directorate.  She built a briefing to explain to the directorate and financial management office a better way to manage resources, drafted a plan to meet monthly to review spending and fund redistribution, assumed responsibility for tracking the directorate’s spend rate, and created monthly reports.

Volunteered to be a directorate Government Purchase Card holder.  Attended FrontPage 2000 Web Development Training to hone her skills for developing the directorate Intranet site; newfound skills immediately put to use in designing and maintaining the page and helping others with questions on web development and how to perform updates.  Attended local Grammar and Proofreading workshop; acquired many valuable skills that were immediately put to use; her enthusiasm for learning and dedication to ensure only the highest quality work was sent out was spread throughout the work center.  Took the initiative to complete the Evelyn Wood's "Reading Dynamics" video course from our training department during off-duty time.

Ms. XXX conscientiousness and tireless work ethic has earned her a reputation as someone who will always get the job done in an exemplary manner.  A critical member of the support directorate; stepped up to many tasks and challenges that are beyond her stated duties.  She is committed to quality work, loyal to her coworkers and supervisors, and extremely competent.  Ms. XXX is an asset to the Southeast Air Defense Sector, the Air National Guard, and the Air Force and is truly deserving of the Air Force Civilian Achievement Award.

3. OTHER DATA:  Grade:  GS-6, Duty Title:  Secretary, Support Directorate, Period Covered: 1 January 2002 to 31 December 2002.

4.  PROPOSED CITATION:  In recognition of her outstanding performance as the Support Directorate Secretary, Southeast Air Defense Sector, Tyndall Air Force Base, Florida, from 1 January 2002 to 31 December 2002.  Ms. XXX's expertise and consistently high level of performance in direct support of the Southeast Air Defense Sector has contributed immeasurably to the successful accomplishment of the Air Force Mission.  Through her meticulous and dedicated work ethic, Ms. XXX ensured the successful stand-up and transformation of the Support Directorate.  The distinctive accomplishments of Ms. XXX reflect great credit upon herself and the United States Air Force.

5.  RECOMMENDATION:  Recommend SEADS/CC approve this award by signing block 2 on the AF 1768 and signing certificate at Tab.

 

 

 

XXX, Colonel, FLANG                                                         Tab
Director of Support                                                               AF Civilian Achievement Award

   


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