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Award Examples

Enlisted Recognition Program
SNCO of the Quarter
4T0X1/Medical Laboratory Technician

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Squ









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LEADERSHIP AND PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Directed ES command/control for Wg mass casualty exercise; timely ambulance response mgt lauded by EET
- Picked CCMRF 4N funct mgr; led 25 4Ns prep for nation's lead on-call med team nxt 4 mon; ready med forces
- Created mon flt recognition pgm; photos displayed; boosted morale for 52 ER staff; provided 24hr care; 6K pts
- Career-field ldr; trained/instructed 15 EMT candidates; achieved exceptional 100% certification rate; msn rdy
- Led ES to 1st of 24 flts in Third Party Collections; coll $21K from civ insurance; won $1.2K for morale fund

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Compl 4 credits/CSU; pursuing B.S. Dgr in Criminal Justice/also finished 90-day NDU Jt Snr Enlisted PME
- Attended EMEDS 1-wk field trng; selected for 1 of 40 AF wide slots to attend USCG CPO Acad.; elite trng

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Co-chaired Wg Ann Awds; recruited volunteers/oversaw 8 sub-committees; unforgettable night for 350 guests
- Prior MMTI; ALS Class 08-2 tapped his skill sets; taught/demonstrated 16 drill movements; molded future ldrs
- Active SNCO! "Discipline" instr, NCOPD crs/18 NCOs--plus, led customs/courtesies blks at 2 FTAC classes


ACRONYMS:
4N: Aerospace Medical Technician
CCMRF: CBRNE Consequence Management Response Force
CSU: Columbia Southern University
EMEDS: Expeditionary Medical Support
EMT: Emergency Medical Technician
MMTI: Master Military Training Instructor
NDU: National Defense University
 

Comment:

I am glad to finally see a current award submission.  This one is a great example on how writing has changed recently.  As you can see in the award, abbreviations will fly as long as the people reading can easily understand what is being expressed.  It is a whole new way of writing but if you try this in your location you might run into problems....

Overall good award package showing excellent leadership capabilities.


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