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Award Examples

Enlisted Recognition Program
SNCO of the Quarter
4T0X1/Medical Laboratory Technician

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Group









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE:
- Piloted installation of two lab analyzers valued at $45K--enhanced patient treatment/###  FW war readiness
- Corroborated 07' CINC Installation Excellence award inputs--lab won ACC level for wing-wide initiatives
- Identified $172K fiscal obligations; devised ### MDG $26M financial plan--ensured continued operations
- Orchestrated SARC training; tracked 95 personnel--elevated MDSS from 47% to 100% compliance in 10 wks
- Provided expertise/guidance for three CDC end-of-course exams--insured professional growth for lab Airmen
- Facilitated two PES II courses; promoted military knowledge/leadership--stirred ###  FW Airmen into action

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Diligently amassed 12-credit hours; earned CCAF in Medical Technology--maintained 4.0 grade point average
- Displayed sound/solid leadership; selected/attended 40-hr 1st Sgt Symposium--procured vital SNCO skill set

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Versatile civic leader; Can-Do-Crew/Special Olympics/Vets Standown/Days of Caring--sacrificed 30 hours
- MDG CFC key worker; led accumulation of $37K to benefit over 2,000 charities--### FW collected $350K+

ACRONYMS:
PES - Professional Enhancement Seminar
 

Note
Good package.  Every bullet except one self improvement bullet showed leadership or management ability.  Only one minor spelling error, Stand Down vs Standown...


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