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Enlisted Recognition Program (SNCO of the Quarter, 2nd)

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: COCOM









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The following Senior Enlisted Recognition Program example has been taken out of a IMT document.  I have changed mission information to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  I will attempt to give a little insight to the entire process if I know it.

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY (8 Lines/ max 40 points)
- Dynamic SNCO! Executed 25 operational missions totaling 91 flying hours; delivered dedicated C4 services
  to CDRUSSTRATCOM; ensured complete real-time Command and Control capability and S/A globally
- Appraised three new wireless technologies to provide real-time alert notification to General and Flag Officers
  -- Bestowed true capability assessment and recommended way ahead with a projected savings of $1.2 million
- Facilitated maintenance; troubleshot unresolved aircraft comm issues impacting CDRUSSTRATCOM missions
  -- Saved Army's Priority Air Transport $140K in parts; increased all available COCOM CDRs' C-37A to 12
- Aggressively responded to communications outage impacting all secure voice capability in the CDR's office
  -- Services restored in 12 min; enabled scheduled teleconference with VCSAF to proceed uninterrupted

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT (2 lines/max 10 points)
- Leadership unmatched; completed First Sergeant Symposium; selected to attend AF First Sergeant Academy
- Awarded Certificate of Academic Achievement from Bellevue University--completed BS Management degree

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT (2 Lines/max 5 points)
- Chaired Top-3 scholarship board--organized Top-3 morning gate support--integral member; refocusing Top-3
- President Air Force Sergeant Association local 1,476 member chapter; directed 9 base and community events

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Great package, very high level visibility and impact and association throughout


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