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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program Airman of the Quarter
 4E031/Public Health Apprentice
Award Cat: AMNWinner: SQU
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| Key Points to Writing 
If you haven't already, take 
a writing classWRITE!!!  The more you do it, the better you get.
Don't be afraid to ask for  HELP.
The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
Use a spell checker (F7 in Office) 
Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.
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 The following Airman of the Quarter example has been taken out of IMT.  I did not change mission information,
only names to protect myself and the
people I have received the information from.  If 
you have anything you would like to
submit, please do so. 
If
you have found this information useful, please let me know. Everyone of these
letters has taken considerable amount of time to put together.  Please
treat yourself to something special from one of the ads on the page.  We
will both get something out of it.  (All money gathered pays for
hosting fees and domain fees.  HONESTLY, when I see money come in it also
prompts me to work harder on the site.) LEADERSHIP AND PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
 - Led HCP pgrm initiative; monitored 1.5K+/raised compliance from 85% to 99.7% 
in 60 days--#1 in ACC/AF
 - Tackled PDHRA dilemma; teamed-up w/42 UDM's/29 units; boosted rate from 
68%-98% in 1 qtr--#1 in ACC
 - Staged Wg's 1st-ever neurocognitive study; scheduled/tested 500+/99.8% 
completion rate--MDG/CC ecstatic
 - Astute Amn; conducted 400+ hearing tests/ID'd eight abnormal exams--MDOS 
Performer of the Month Feb '09
 - Key player in NORI exercise; reviewed 280+ med records in 12 hrs--zero 
findings/praised by 509 MDG CC
 - Invaluable team member; processed 305 deployers/verified 4.8K+ medical 
requirements--zero discrepancies
 - Organized three OEHWG meetings; coord'd w/20+ members/advised 120 exam 
criteria--320+ employees safe
 - Revamped 92 occ shop case files w/3K+ work hazards; reduced waste by 10 
%--saved 100 duty hrs annually
 - Completed five F&R evals; observed 200 chemicals/230+ hazardous noise 
equipment--protected 260 workers
 - Bolstered CES; raised OHE compliance from dead last to # 3 in Wg; lifted rate 
> 16%--exceeds AF std by 8%
 
 SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
 - Earned nine credits toward CCAF/Bachelor degree; sustained 4.0 GPA--three 
credits shy from two-yr degree
 - Finished UGT 9 mos early; upgraded five PH pgms in process/two ID'd #1 in 
command--lauded by ACC PHO
 
 BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
 - Voted as MDG booster club sec; key to MDG's 1st ever org; suggested twelve 
ideas--championed camaraderie
 - Selected as Sq AFAS rep; notified 70% of personnel in 8 days/earned $1.5K--on 
pace to reach $56K Wg goal
 
 Abbreviations:
 AFAS- Air Force Aide Society
 CES- Civil Engineering Squadron
 F&R- Fitness and Risk
 HCP- Hearing Conservation Program
 MDOS- Medical Operations
 mbr- member
 MDOS- Medical Operations Squadron
 mos- months
 MXG- Maintenance Group
 NORI- Nuclear Operational Readiness Inspection
 occ- occupational
 OEHWG- Occupational Environmental and Health Working Group
 OHE- Occupational Health Exam
 org- organization
 PDHRA- Post Deployment Health Reassessment
 PH- Public Health
 PHO- Public Health Officer
 std- standard
 UGT- Up-Grade-Training
 WAFB- Whiteman Air Force Base
 Wg- Wing
 
Note:
 Good package.  You don't see UDMs competing very often.  Very 
base/community involvement.
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