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Air Force Medical Service (AFMS)

USAF Laboratory Senior NCO of the Year (2009)

NCOIC, Laboratory Services

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Air Force

AFI 36-2856 # 19


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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE:
- Led Afghanistan's first tri-svc lab; united 17 remote districts/11 FOBs--stabilized expeditionary medical care
- Directed EMDG security tm; secured perimeter from Taliban fighters--guarded $20M assets, 450 staff/patients
- Drove MDG CAP inspection re-accreditation; validated 576 checklist items--earned outstanding 99.8% rating
- Flt Patient Advocate; elevated customer svc/garnered "Perfect" score for advocacy--HSI rated MDG Excellent
- Initiated first OEF blood QA pgm; ensured $3M/2.1K units safely issued--praised by CENTCOM Blood Chief
- NCOIC IPPD tm; refined HD readiness skills at DoD HAZMAT crs/2 hrs--prepped 22 mbrs for CBRNE event
- Outlined lab equip interface strategy; standardized CENTCOM result retrieval process--hailed by AFFOR/SG
- Steered Egyptian MTF lab assistance; issued 638 blood units, educated docs--earned Humanitarian Svc Medal
- Orchestrated Gp/VA Hospital sharing agreement; ensured resource distribution--saved $9K in outsourced tests
- Organized seven Red Cross blood drives/$281K svs; staffed rotations/provided safe supply--saved 351 lives
- Repaired OEF $348K BW Pgm; sorted/refreshed 113 expired items--tested/averted 1st real-world AOR threat
- Oversaw Flt's collection of 3d party insurance; reutilized funds for MTF upgrades--recouped $813K for MDG
- Benchmarked OEF/OIF lab analyzers; executed $824K equip upgrades--enhanced AOR combat causality care
- Stellar leader; ### EDMSS SNCO/mo x2/Sq SNCO/yr '08/SNCO/qtr x2/Gp Sijan award '09/coined by Navy SG
- EMDG Demand Reduction Drug Pgm Mgr; shipped 124 samples/tracked $6K resources--zero error rate at Wg

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT/BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- ### AEW Top 3 Vice-President; set-up Fallen Hero memorial/steered 4 base events--represented 8K mil mbrs
- Mastered Level I Army Combat Trg; learned self defense/combat tactics/16 hrs--expanded warfighter abilities
- ### FW Vice-President AF Sergeants Association--raised retention/93% rate--surpassed recruiting goal 200%
- Passionate civic leader; accumulated 513 hrs in community svc/projected positive AF image--earned MOVSM
- Advanced MTF managerial skillset; pursued Healthcare BS degree--earned 8 hours/4 classes from completion

ACRONYMS:
AFFOR - Air Force Forces
BW - Bio Warfare
CAP - College of American Pathologists
CBNRE - Chemical Biological Nuclear Radiological Explosive
FOB - Forward Operating Base
HD - Homeland Defense
IPPD - In-Place Patient Decontamination
MOVSM - Military Outstanding Volunteer Service Medal
QA - Quality Assurance
SG - Surgeon General
 

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OUTSTANDING!  Even a non medical AFSC can understand this.  After reading this, it is very obvious how deployments can be a significant discriminator...


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