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Air Force Medical Service (AFMS)

Outstanding Base Bioenvironmental Engineering Airman of the Year (2009)

4B051/Bioenvironmental Engineering Journeyman

Award Cat: Amn
Winner: ???

AFI 36-2856 # 14


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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE:
- Non-stop initiative; SQ Amn OTQ, 1st qtr '09/GP Flt 4th qtr '08/Top 3 best MDG dorm rm/best AF Hosp '08!
- Unrivaled; managed Environmental prgm in 3-month NCO absence; 95 samples collected; zero EPA violations
- Orchestrated base vent prgm; ensured airflow of 125 systems; 47 shops safe from contamination/explosion risk
- Implemented aircraft water truck testing; ensured potable delivery; protected crew & pax of 600 aircraft/month
- Earned kudos from 517th Airlift SQ; combined shops/revamped HazCom; rewarded w/C-17 incentive flight
- Created IH/Env/Rad tracker; countered 57% staff shortage/2-mo system outage; 100% sample accountability
- Completed 4 weeks NBC/WMD courses; honed HazMat team procedures; 3 responses lauded by WG EET
- First in flight certified on lead & mold; inspected 7 bldg concerns; sampled/alleviated risk to 200+ occupants
- Fit-tested 247 EAFB warriors; instilled gas mask confidence; WG ready to deploy/"Excellent" per PACAF/IG
- Rapidly completed 31 preg profiles w/in 1-3 days; id'd acute chemical hazards to doc; closed turn-around gap
- Identified 6 untested taps in CDC; quick sampling ensured safe water for 205 kids; vital for nat'l accreditation
- Respirator-fit 171 personnel; on-site trng of 21 ICU staff/uninterrupted pt care; saved $1.8K in overtime pay
- Authorized use of 682 chems; researched substitutes/recommended protection; linchpin of HazMat Mgmt Team
- Spearheaded health surveys in 11 shops; evaluated 24 high-risk industrial activities; safeguarded 108 workers
- Expertly managed $369K equip inventory; 100% calibrated; over 146 response items ready at moment's notice

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT/BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Wing "Outstanding Performer"; sole Amn in Army deployment ceremony; paid tribute to 3.5K brothers in arms
- Coached 2 soccer teams/17 kids; ran 20 mi Relay for Life/raised $49K; aided ROTC/earned $21K for charity
- Self-motivated student; aced Spanish CLEP; completed six semester hours toward CCAF degree in Occ Health
- Orchestrated wkly shop PT sessions/competitions; motivated colleagues to better fitness; 100% flight pass rate
- Achieved American naturalization; perfect scores on three required tests; proud citizen of country he defends!

ACRONYM LIST:
CDC - Child Development Center
EPA - Environmental Protection Agency
ICU - Intensive Care Unit
PREG - Pregnancy

Comments:

Not a bad package. There were a couple of wasted lines up top.  Then there is mypPersonal dislike of "AF ambassador" in any package, otherwise it seems pretty good. 
 


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