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12 Outstanding Airman of the Year (2009)

1C6X1, GPS Operators & Operations Support Scheduler

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Superb performance puts her above peers; OG Amn of the Year, Crew of 1st & 2nd Qtr & Amn of 2nd Qtr '09
- Executed 750+ AEP sorties/2 on-orbit mnvrs--helped unit win '08 Henry Awd "#1 Space Ops Sqd in AFSPC"
- "Highly Qualified" rating on annual eval, AFSPC's highest mark--1st in unit w/ zero errors using new eval sys
- Executed 75 backup C2 contacts; returned 225 minutes to Satellite Control Network--saved Air Force $1M+
- Handpicked for 3 day AMCS deployment; verified contingency ops capability of backup C2--seamless transfer
- Rapidly recovered from 6hrs MCS downtime; 25 supports/20 navs in record 3hrs--recaptured 99.9% accuracy
- Provided accurate nav signal for A-10 GBU drops; 3 Taliban commanders KIA--combat effects through OCO
- Readied MCS, 33 SVs, & 4 GAs for $15M BSEU upgrade--maintained amazing 99% ops availability w/ users
- Carried out three system warmstarts; corrected software glitches--minimal C2 downtime/AOR ops unhindered
- Commanded 98 ARTS supports--key to '08 Moorman & Herres Awds for #1 Wg & #1 Wg with space mission
- A++ scheduler; go to for all areas: eval's/ob's/mission schedule/sim trainer--met needs of 130+ CMR persons
- Dual certified in primary/backup C2 systems; increased ops flexibility--successful launch of next-gen GPS SV
- Conducted launch initial turn-on of $75M SV; improved constellation performance--new US frequency secured
- Performed nav uploads to entire GPS constellation three times; third time under 5 hrs--revitalized ops to users
- Expertly solved four satellite anomalies--quick reaction prevented nav signal degradation to OCO warfighters
- Chosen for Strategic Cmd '09 Global Thunder C2 exercise--tested GPS contingency ability at the highest level
- Accounts for 140+ unit personnel; sorts through recall roster monthly--key to prep & response to emergencies

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Tackled CDCs with ease; completed 2 months ahead of schedule--achieved astounding 91% EOC test score
- Completed Associate in Applied Science and Air & Space Ops CCAF--earned 6 credit hrs toward Bachelors
- Attended "Get Motivated" nat'l seminar; reinvigorated personal drive--brought inspirational msg to flight of six
- Accomplished Seven Habits of Highly Effective People, ##SW Silver Bullet writing & Basic Finance courses
- Volunteered to be one of the unit physical training leaders--established rigorous weekly unit training sessions

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- President of Booster Club; orchestrated eight squadron fund-raisers--$2K+ for going away gifts and mementos
- Pit Bull Rescue humanitarian/Judge for Elem Science Fair--fostered 100+ dogs/inspected 25+ science projects
- Dedicated 2 days to Adopt-a-Highway; collected 200lbs of trash/debris--restored beauty to natural landscape
- Volunteered 4 hrs at Habitat for Humanity; contribution saved $1600 in contractor cost--local family moved in!
- POC for AFA football games--cor'd 20+ volunteers for security--raised $2K+ for unit team building functions

Acronyms:

AEP - Acritectual Evolution Plan GA - Ground Antennas
ARTS - Automated Remote Tracking Station BSEU - Black Shelter Equipment Upgrade
C2 - Command and Control CMR - Crew Mission Ready
AMCS - Alternate Military Control Station EOC - End of Course
MCS - Military Control Station AFA - Air Force Academy
OCO - Overseas Contingency Operations
GBU - Guided Bomb Unit
SV - Satellite Vehicle
 

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Good package.  Overall it is very solid. One thing that can be improved on is Leadership. 


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